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Actions of Love

"Actions of Love" by: Eric L. Boddie What if I were to instigate your heart to join with my own Would you make me the place you call home If I challenge your body to a duel of pleasure Would you be willing to expose your treasure If I dare your Soul to become my mate Would you define me as your fate If I urge your eyes to see my truth Would you help me build Love under just one roof If I influence your hands to want to touch my frame Would you declare yourself as only my personal toy without shame If I bet your tongue that it can't out wrestle mine in any timing Would you just accept it or would you die trying If I inflict you with Love That's Truly Heavenly Would you take your rightful place in Eric's Destiny....

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Date: 3/2/2016 8:39:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:21:00 PM
Aaahhh, that is so romantic and humbling, and I like everything of it.
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:52:00 AM
This is such a romantic poem. Greeting card material with a blank space where persons name could be. ie, so and so's destiny. Love this very heartfelt. Toni O.
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Date: 1/27/2016 2:01:00 PM
I love how romantically erotic this piece is. It's sexual, yet tasteful all the same. I loved how you put it all together.
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:55:00 PM
a very alluring read Eric, thank you for sharing:), Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:56:00 PM
so very ROMANTIC :) it's a 7 :)) Take care
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Date: 1/24/2016 10:36:00 AM
This is so very romantic and lovely.
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:04:00 PM
Fabulous piece, Eric. Especially the last two lines. Marvelous. Thanks for the visit.
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Date: 1/22/2016 10:56:00 AM
excellent write Eric...lovely
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Date: 1/22/2016 6:19:00 AM
....yes, IF ... :) - A lovely poem, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2016 10:31:00 PM
That lady that truly is waiting will be ready to take the challenge a soul mate is the right lady . Great write Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/21/2016 6:33:00 PM
I hope you have found the right one to take up the challenge Eric:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/21/2016 6:10:00 PM
Those ifs sound as though they'd be very hard to turn down by the right woman. Very romantic and sensual, Eric.
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