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Across the Line My Version

in this sandsea of darkness lieing with a pain across his cheast pretending he is heartless as a fire flashes from the sky he was fragile and frozen when paranioa took away his friend and now he is somehow more broken he is the waiting for the end of his demise holding onto all of his goodbyes holding his fate across the line slowly breaking lieing with a pain across her chest she wakes with her craving as the fire burns her eye she was fragile and frozen when deaths grip took away her friend and now shes somehow more broken she is waiting for the end of her demise holding onto all of her goodbyes holding death across the line *this is a song by linkin park off the underground album but i did alter it somewhat i did not create the song only changed some of the lyrics*

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Date: 6/15/2011 11:34:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Dennis. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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