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Across the Fields At Dawning

Darkness lifts with the hint of suns' light across the fields at dawning. The coming of day releases the night as moving some great awning. The things that were hid now come to light across the fields at dawning. The suns' rays pierce the dark with their might as alone, I write yawning. Another world I look upon across the fields at dawning. What makes for tribulation is gone across the fields at dawning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/2/2009 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful write Douglas, dawn is a great part of the day>James
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Date: 5/21/2009 3:11:00 PM
This is a beautiful illustration of God's love upon our lives: the Sun (or SON) as it pierces the darkness and warms the chill of evil...transforming our lives from ashes to beauty with His powerful grace! WONDERFUL! Donna
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:34:00 PM
A very nice and inspiring poem. I love reading this kind of poems. Thanks for sharing this to us. Ernilando
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Date: 5/1/2009 7:46:00 PM
Amazing how our troubles, those that make "for tribulation," are gone when our attention is captured by the serenity of watching "the fields at dawning." So much peace in this great poem, Douglas!
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Date: 5/1/2009 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/1/2009 7:54:00 AM
Bob Marley says "what was hidden fromthe wise and prudent ... now revealed to babes and suckling ..." what a powerful reminder. love.
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Date: 5/1/2009 7:07:00 AM
I could read this over and over. Well done. .."fields at dawning" slips off the tongue in a wonderful way. BG
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