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Acquisition of a Fresh Perspective

will you please wake up but first signal where you will place your dreams not there my grey hair and nitro tablets might not mix your eyes so matter-of-factly smack me upon my brow a reminder of how the years can grow grass through concrete or turn boulders to sand forgive me if I piffle forgive me if I bore but you must know that I can’t piss like a stripling anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/25/2018 4:02:00 PM
An interesting piece for sure Richard! I do love that you read your work. It gives it a different creative edge. I like to read it first and then listen for both experiences :)
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/26/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Judith. I like hearing Ann Sexton read her poems. She was great.
Date: 3/23/2018 11:58:00 PM
Ha, this is both sarcastic and yet real! A guys perspective, for sure! :)
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/24/2018 12:37:00 AM
Laura if I remember right I was mad at my ex-wife when I wrote this. Funny how that goes. Thanks for stopping by...............peace!
Date: 3/20/2018 9:19:00 AM
Well done, Richard. I love the audio with it - the personality and the reality bite in your words. Always, Laura
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/20/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thanks Laura and thanks for your support........peace!
Date: 3/18/2018 8:39:00 AM
How do you expect me to water the plants the same way every time...and have a fresh perspective...I agree
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/20/2018 7:29:00 PM
Arturo I couldn't agree more. Thanks!
Date: 3/17/2018 11:51:00 PM
This conjures so much! Love a wee poem packing big time. :)
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/20/2018 7:27:00 PM
This poem was so subliminal. What ever the hell that means.

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