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the wind resounding... wild flowers in the meadow responsively dance Entered Brian Strand's New hiku footle tanka contest 5/11/22

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Date: 11/14/2022 2:04:00 PM

Great imagery in this one, Harry. I can see the dancing flowers! Have a great week my friend. Bill

Date: 11/10/2022 7:08:00 AM

Yes, dancing wildflowers. I dance with them! Congratulations your win Harry! :)

Date: 11/9/2022 11:16:00 AM

so glad to see this on the HM at least. I guess this is one I never saw yet, and I really like it.

Date: 11/8/2022 1:54:00 PM

Good one that you have penned in this one. Congratulations on being recognized in Brian's contest. Sara

Date: 11/5/2022 11:30:00 AM

Great, Harry,,hope you are a winner in the contest! Pangie

Date: 11/5/2022 8:30:00 AM

Very nice, harry. I have observed this in my meadow, too. BOL in the contest.

Date: 11/5/2022 5:55:00 AM

Your poetry is replete with a certain tone and beauty. Well articulated, Harry, conveying a beautiful picture of the flowers and meadows.

Date: 11/5/2022 5:05:00 AM

I hear the sound and see the dance. Well done, harry.

Date: 11/5/2022 2:36:00 AM

Astounding haiku. Superb imagery.

Date: 11/5/2022 2:15:00 AM

A stunning image, can just see them swaying in the breeze. Tom