Acorns

Soon fall will start Tall Oaks blow in chill winds Dropping acorns Food for woodland folk As nights draw in A long catnap awaits 4th place in 'Life without U & ME'

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/15/2010 6:31:00 AM

So glad you liked Night Stalker! I love writting long ones and mostly no one reads or comment on them I really appreciate it! You have inspired an acorn verse! Light & Love

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 7/4/2010 7:00:00 AM

I think I'm going to favorite you - I'm loving all of these incredible pieces! :) -Grace

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 7/3/2010 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations! : )

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/3/2010 9:13:00 AM

Well done write! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2010 11:25:00 PM

Cool way to do the challenge, Congrats on your win, NIck! LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2010 11:07:00 AM

Many congratulations Nick on your win in Nikko's contest with this little gem >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/2/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations Nick on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/2/2010 8:45:00 AM

I hadn't read this one before Nick - It's wonderful! Congrat's on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~

Date: 7/2/2010 8:22:00 AM

Such is the cycle of life. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/2/2010 7:46:00 AM

Congrats Nick!! This was such a beautiful write about fall-- couldn't help but feel those chilly winds and see those acorns--sort of reminded me of Enid Blyton's writes (one of my favorite children's authors), actually ---nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2010 7:35:00 AM

Congrats Nick on your winning poem in Nikko's contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u .. great job ..enjoy your win my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...at 4 a.m...

Jerri Ward

Date: 6/29/2010 5:21:00 AM

This reminds me of playing with acorns in the summer and looking forward to the fall. Thank you for your comments on my verses.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2010 9:13:00 PM

Very picturesque! Makes me think of the woods in a chill fall air! LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/28/2010 4:46:00 PM

lovely! and thanks for the kind comments on my verses! Light & Love

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 6/28/2010 6:46:00 AM

My favorite season is Fall! This is a colorful verse. I especially like how you describe Winter's approach. :)