Achoo

A sneeze signals trouble, all hell is breaking loose, another one seems loud, annoying it must be, Anna hands me Kleenex as more body shocks come... Achoo! Achoo!! Achoo!!!

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 4:43:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats George:-) hugs Jan x

George Aul
Date: 8/15/2016 9:59:00 AM

Congrats also on 1st place............... George

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/13/2016 12:09:00 PM

George, congrats on your well written and humorous Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 8:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, George - Great, done !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

George Aul
Date: 8/13/2016 11:32:00 AM

Thanks and congrats also............ George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:22:00 AM

This was Awesomely clever. Loved it, George.

George Aul
Date: 8/13/2016 11:30:00 AM

Thank you........... George

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/10/2016 2:34:00 AM

Ha ha ha...funny and very clever:) Good luck, George:)

George Aul
Date: 8/10/2016 9:31:00 AM

Thanks so much for the comment................ George

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2016 12:26:00 PM

Clever take on the 'A' theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

George Aul
Date: 8/10/2016 9:31:00 AM

Thanks as always, Jan................ George