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Aching Heart

Indigestion Is the question Brain illusion Or misdirection Doctor's pill This sickly ill Cannot repair To fit the bill Just time to heal Oh, heartache feel Is all to quell My ache and reel Restlessness Just to confess Invades my very Consciousness A hope that sticks Physician's tricks The long-shot risk Of one more fix Like fracture weld Or soulful meld Simple solution.. Just to be held CV 31.10.23

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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 8:23:00 AM
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Poem reads strong, fast and to the point. The last paragraph is apt.
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 10/31/2023 9:37:00 AM
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Thank you Hilda. Cindy x
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 10/31/2023 1:51:00 AM
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A good poem. Well done.
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 10/31/2023 2:06:00 AM
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Jeanette - thank you too dear. Cindy x
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/31/2023 12:38:00 AM
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I like the rhythm and rhyme of this. I agree hugs are great! Hugs love and light.
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 10/31/2023 2:05:00 AM
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Thank you Karen my dear, yes all for a hug. Best Cindy x

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