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.-G-. .-R-. .-O-. .-O-. .-V-. .-E-. .-S-. pierce my ears, caressing notes to rake tears on such moonlit aches, strings groan through passages on breaths as scrapes of violin lurch; veiled weeping dives low like fine spear falling on my riddled head, as if to crack reeds just there, enthralled by heaves of waved air swelling along melodies tragic in liquid gothic drones, my old innocence plucked raw beyond deep allegro of time; tunes' long drags hard to bear peeling my burnt flesh slow the fine bow screeches, I cry on slain notes. © by nette onclaud for Craig Cornish Concrete/Shape Contest

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  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Nice description of a bow. Congrats on your win, sorry for late. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:46:00 PM
    A woman!!!! : ) Splendid shape, Nette! Congratulations on your win in Craig's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:48:00 AM
    Poetic music! Every line is laced with sound and emotion!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:42:00 AM
    First let me fab this grandiose instrument!

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:30:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:39:00 PM
    Very creative idea, Nette! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:32:00 PM
    wonderful shape nette and you are so sympatico with sound! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Congrats, Nette, with this imaginative shape and write! Excellent!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations nette great shape what a whizz you are xx

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Knew it would be a winner...Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Congratulations Nette, on your win with this wonderful and creative write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Wonderful write and the shape is great! Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:13:00 PM
    Nette, congrats on your very musical win..David

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:05:00 PM
    Nette--Wonderful!! Thanks for entering--read my blog

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:44:00 AM
    Nette, I absolutely love this. You make it look so easy.. All the best for the contest!! Hope your week's been not too hectic ;-) *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:40:00 PM
    Brilliant!!!! :) love ya, deb

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:09:00 PM
    wow...Nette,,, now this picture kicks ~ butt... and you know it... good luck in the contest...xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 3:34:00 PM
    I sing song from your glorious write, and the shape creates a way for this tune to be produced! This is a wonderfully grafted write working with musical notes from scores of pleasurable finds by your gracious hands! You sure can produce the greatest of songs my good friend! You will do well in the contest, I haven't seen such an awesome shape as this! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:44:00 PM
    So you forgot to enter it in the contest...isn't so?