Aches and Pains

Aches and pains, aches and pains Is this what old age is about? What about sailing off into the sunset Instead we complain about gout It hasn't been bad at least not for me Been one of the fortunate ones Count all my blessings every night Each morn I welcome the sun Why me I ask, how come I'm the one To escape those old age symptoms Like gall stones, cholesterol, and diabetes Lived a lifetime most can't fathom One day, that day will be upon me Hope the hell it's quick and painless A sissy I am and I always will be Perhaps I'll continue to be blessed © Jack Ellison 2013
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Date: 10/25/2013 6:30:00 AM
Great Man I pray you will elude them- wait and see! Friend, JM
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Date: 10/25/2013 7:00:00 AM
Not doing too badly my good friend! Thanks for the good words as always!!!
Date: 10/24/2013 12:31:00 PM
Kenny....hope you stick around for a long long time...Please, promise? HUGS!
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Date: 10/24/2013 1:01:00 PM
OKAY OKAY I PROMISE!!! Do you know anyone personally who've lived to over a hundred??? No? So I may be the first then! LOL Love, Kenny xoxoxox
Date: 10/24/2013 9:00:00 AM
Well....I'm only 54 ..worked too hard I guess...I have these aches and pains already! Hope they never find you blessed one.......you're too sweet!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/24/2013 12:08:00 PM
Whoaaaaaaaa! Have I told you lately that I love you!!! LOL Gonna save this one!!! Love ya Donna dear Donna! xoxoxox
Date: 10/24/2013 8:23:00 AM
My 107 Aunt used to say... Stay active and the pain stays away... Worked for her!... Now with Dragon... The more active he is... the more bruises we get... I began sitting down too much when I broke a few bones and everything ached. Started running around and all the pains went away!... for now... I'm lucky. They told me to be careful with my ankles. I have considerable arthritis is them... Never knew I had any there... Maybe like Dragon... I'm not all there!... He heard me! Gotta run!... LOL
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:30:00 AM
Oh yes, aches and pains... they come and go, travel from legs to back to arms to feet!!! Must say I've been pretty lucky and free of it until this year. My old legs have supported this body for a long long time... they're finally complaining! LOL Hang in there! Hugs xoxox
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