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Ache

What is worse life or death A life of pretence A smile of defense It all makes no difference A pain that aches the heart A touch that you have no say To sell your soul to the devil His words cause such pain His attack is over you Your voice is caged Your spirt is dying Time to hit the floor Or was it the door Was it you you ask Those words you question Deep inside what can you learn No corner has turned A sin to yourself.. A creature of defeat is what you see For me ......... Broken glass is what surrounds For that is what you found An evil deep inside There is no good to reach For what does he preach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 11:48:00 AM
A poem that really grabs you, I like this one Love Roger x
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:51:00 PM
Wow !Sarah, this is real good..What a message at the end. So far so good not bored yet. This is a deep one, gees but that is what made it so good. very intresting and yes I got your soup mail, now i have returned it I left you some soup mail as well,..p.d.
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:29:00 AM
To be alive to me is a gift, to want to be dead, comes from ones inner rift. And tragically we can become devils inside. Wonderful poetry Sarah, i enjoy your poetry >> James
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:34:00 AM
Got me thinking...interesting poem.
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:04:00 AM
Thank you sharon for wanting to read my poem ,,,sometimes i wonder too what was that all about ..it s about a abusive partnership and what she feels inside ...but i am pleased i intrigued you sarah x
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Date: 5/29/2010 12:54:00 AM
Hi Sarah, I'm not sure if I've grasped the full meaning of your poem yet, but I'm intrigued enough to read it again and again. I see you're new to Poetry Soup, like me. Welcome fellow poet :)
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:30:00 PM
THIS WAS AN INTERESTING WRITE, MUCH ENJOYED
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:30:00 PM
Nicely penned poem with rhyming
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:44:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. The rhyming pattern is excellent. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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