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The abundant sadness was veritably escaping her eyes; Fear of oblivion has been over come. It was improbable to forget the past; But intellectual to think of the future. There has been many hamartias made; But all have been forgiven. Conceivably she thought of her life; Accepting the fact that millennial mistakes have been made.

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Date: 5/6/2016 10:18:00 PM
ALYSSA CROSLEY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:04:00 PM
Alyssa Crosley, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/21/2014 2:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Alyssa. I hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:05:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alyssa :) - I choose your first great written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:46:00 AM
cool write
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Date: 5/20/2014 11:00:00 PM
Alyssa, deep poem,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:27:00 PM
Hi Alyssa, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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