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Abyss

View the world with a flash of light, Yet every corner has a dark blight. Infectious it spreads within perception, Abusing the thoughts to a point of deception- Tis just an abyss of belief- Hope, passion, lost due to lack of relief. Note:Entered this in the word I hate the most contest and didn't realize it said "4-6 couplets" I only wrote 4-6 lines. I apologize for that read the rules wrong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/14/2012 9:58:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It has great rhyme, rhythm, and flow to it..I have posted a contest this morning check it out but read it all very well..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2012 6:23:00 AM
you did a wonderful job with the images and emotion in this... wishing for more, luis.. :) huggs!
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Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 7/28/2012 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, I was planning on it :)

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