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Abysmal Sorrow

You are my idol, epitome of my life. I treasure thy memories,buried deep in my heart. I cherish that warmth as a toddler, When on your chest I slept . I miss your fingers caressing my hair, as I wept. I admire that hug as I excelled in exams, I miss your temper as I annoyed you with my pals. I adore those moments when we shared ideas on humanity, education, nation and politics, I miss those times when we celebrated days and events. I felt dejected as u relinquish life, Tears go dry in abysmal sorrow, Now as I recapture in retrospection, I have nothing but to embrace your memories............ You are my sole inspiration, I miss you deeply, dad !!!! Written on In loving memory of my father, and dedicated to him Now for contest- Father's Day Sponsor - Carol Eastman

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Date: 6/11/2014 10:34:00 PM
Dr Umpa, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:14:00 PM
same here, dr. upma.. congrats on your greeat win; very touching!.. huggs
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:20:00 PM
Very touching Upma! A lovely dedication to your Dad who will always live in your memory and in your heart. Congratulations! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Paul ! It's ten years now n not a single day without his thoughts ,, he's in my heart n more so in my soul ! Thanks for lovely words // Upma //
Date: 6/10/2014 6:02:00 AM
Well written poem to feel gratitude for the presence of a loving father. Congratulations on winning, Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/10/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Noël for lovely comments !
Date: 6/9/2014 11:12:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, Dr.Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/10/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Dr Ram !
Date: 6/9/2014 8:58:00 PM
A winning tribute so lovingly written my friend. Congrats on your win!!!!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/10/2014 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Robert for ur always beautiful comments !
Date: 6/9/2014 8:21:00 PM
alovely tribute. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/10/2014 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Joyce ,, appreciate ur visit n lovely comments !
Date: 3/14/2014 1:45:00 AM
Dr Upma, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:24:00 PM
You were so lucky to have him and memories will soften your sorrow. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:45:00 PM
dr. upma, your emotive piece warmed my heart... sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Dr. Upma . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/23/2013 11:30:00 AM
You have penned a great tribute to one who loved you and planted many memories to comfort you in his absence. Congrats on a well earned win.....Jake
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:27:00 AM
Lovely and touching, M E M O R I E S
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Date: 6/22/2013 10:03:00 PM
DR. . Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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