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Absorbed

Robins and sparrows and chickadees, A hummingbird or two. Their bird song puts my soul at ease Dispelling mood of blue As I listen and absorb the view. 25/06/2012

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David O'Haolin Whalen

Date: 7/4/2012 3:27:00 PM

Francine, I love poets who do justice to Nature, and you certainly do just that. It"s obviously you're a Nature lover. (like me!)

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2012 11:39:00 PM

Anybody who admires birds will like reading this piece.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/1/2012 8:10:00 AM

A nice way to start a Sunday morning, Francine! - Tim

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 7/1/2012 1:32:00 AM

''God loved the birds and invented trees .Man loved the birds and invented cages'' .thank you for your kindness and love on them .jk

The Situation

Date: 6/30/2012 7:36:00 PM

so incomplete common you can do more. this is a great start!

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 6/30/2012 11:07:00 AM

Straight and simple, Francine good piece keep your pen rolling. Cheers.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/28/2012 8:27:00 AM

beautiful write, Francine - and one of your favourite forms, I know : ) Congrats on your wins, my friend

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/27/2012 12:43:00 PM

comfortable view,relaxing surroundings,which I was sitting beside you,great write Francine

Steven Beesley

Date: 6/27/2012 4:43:00 AM

What a lovely poem!

Don Johnson

Date: 6/27/2012 12:19:00 AM

the sweetest love i never knew, walked by with air of honey dew, and left me here alive, to do, sweet thoughts of meditation...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2012 12:15:00 AM

Francine, beautiful poem.....lovely bird song comming all over to Norway.... - oxox Anne-Lise

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/26/2012 5:46:00 PM

Ahh... this is a lovely QUINTAIN Francine! There are few things more uplifting than bird song. Well done! Keith :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/26/2012 4:07:00 PM

The little animals have such wonderful energy! Hope you are well and happy! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/26/2012 2:02:00 PM

I like this and I do so enjoy my birds. I especially like the cooing of the doves. Thanks for commenting on my posting. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2012 9:16:00 AM

Enjoyed your expressive five line poem..Those birds are just wonderful addition to a day..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2012 9:51:00 PM

short and sweet, FRancine. I just love the birds all around my house right now. I bet you have a bunch too.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/25/2012 9:45:00 PM

Francine, your lovely quintain is a breath of fresh air! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/25/2012 9:14:00 PM

I love the picture this paints. A lovely write, Francine. Love, Kim

Mad Hu

Date: 6/25/2012 9:12:00 PM

beautiful write