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Above the Rest

Guileless, autumn lay upon a land past the tiresome days of summer, above the tender roots of jaded lawn blanketing the bulbs for nubile spring left in kindness ~ calling winter's winds to rest… Wasted are the teeth of winter on the bloodless throat of fall, no dinner will the withered rent-shirt of well spent life make only a soft and cozy remnant left in kindness ~ where winter’s hoary form can rest… *Inspired by Bob Quigley's tanka Autumn's Death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2012 12:26:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 4:57:00 PM
Above the rest indeed!! A winner you are! :)
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful win for wonderful poem, Well done here your job of winter's rest. bl
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Date: 1/14/2012 8:25:00 PM
truly enchanting choice of words.... betcha the spring will sweep in faster with this one... congrats on the win.
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Date: 1/14/2012 6:48:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:31:00 PM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. A DYNAMIC SET OF TREASURE3D WORDS..
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:29:00 PM
Only one word Debbie...WOW. Congrats on your 1st place & very nice to meet you too.
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:58:00 AM
Nice beautifully knitted together,Debbie.Congratulations on your win with a well deserved poetry.Lovingly,Fabiyas
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:56:00 PM
I really like Bob's here and then how you got inspired to do another one on fall. I especially like the second stanza of yours, calling autumn guileless!
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:05:00 PM
Wow...banter deluxe! Beauty eve~N
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Date: 9/23/2011 5:31:00 PM
I am not aware of this BQ verse that inspired this poem, but I love the way time passes through the seasonal expressions...especially how autumn lays upon a land past the tiresome days of summer....that describes mine soo well...You are such a mature poet, Debbie. REading your work helps me expand my own poetic mind! (Teenie tiny poetic mind of mine!) lol. Gwendolen
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