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Above Forever Biting into the dead, he tastes the aftertaste of burnt ashes! The meal of her emotions, buried alive within silken strands. Blood inside sorrow burning, sweet desire weeping... Yet, it cannot possibly extinguish his pain. Bleeding heartbreaks do not expire. His eternal torment is fortified. Into two pieces he is equally divided. One who feels he has his back against the wall! The other who has not a care. Free falling teardrops, salted within life's passionate carnage. Nails in his mouth for he is iron born, attaching beauties have felt his plunging sword. His sanctuary is a dream catcher. He's stuck inside it's Web, hanging there above forever, until she takes his last breath away. Always now, in this moment was he formed. Long before time, he was destined to be hers Until they meet again his heart pauses. He will not know eternal glory, until her love courses through his veins! As he has promised, he will succumb to her The angels then will sing Rejoicing bells will ring out grateful notes Both will finally atone for their sins! A collaboration with Richard Lamoureux and Liam Mc Daid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/27/2016 4:34:00 PM
Liam, Another great collaboration between you and Richard. The dark ones are always fun to do. Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:02:00 AM
- A great collaboration with Richard, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/26/2016 3:48:00 PM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate,captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Richard.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So profound!Just amazing! truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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