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Above Desire

Though days are long and nights longer by far, and seconds pass while hours slip slowly by; I glimpse the long gone past through door ajar to those golden moments my spirit flies. Hand in hand loosely locked we two glide o'er pebbled paths and rutted rambling roads; no draconic vision belays our stride for in our hearts there sings a ribald ode. Of Artur and his lovely Guinevere, ensconced in castle, turret's flags unfurled; who boldly bask inside the glow and glare, all round this cameo the conscience curls. Oh, let all mankind gallantly aspire, to these lofty heights above man's desire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2014 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on the win. The flowing expressions, debbie
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Date: 2/15/2010 1:47:00 PM
Deborah--very enjoyable and romantic. What a beautiful set of thoughts you have presented here--and with such dignity and timelessness. The thought of aspiring to something high and valued--that is something for me to think upon.
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:54:00 PM
Eeb, I have seen this one. It's perfectly metered, my dear, and it's also a great theme. And wow, it's an English sonnet!! You need to post it as a sonnet, that is what you have here!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2010 2:04:00 PM
DEB, WAY TO GO, Your beat is nearly PERFECT now. You are a fast learner, woman. (soupmail)
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:43:00 AM
I am humbled by this poem, after my blood sweat and tears, trying to "get" iambic pentameter in my head!! How beautiful this is...it looks so easy when someone else does it!!!! Thank you once again for your patience, and push....step by step! Ahhhh....free verse...where are you????????????!!!
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:45:00 AM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, I thought when i saw the Form of this It would be an example of Blank verse But it Rhymes I saw the "Artur" and was going to write about a typo I see YOU have explained it Thank-YOU A Superb Pen Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments and YOUR Blog from ROBIN I miss her YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/10/2010 5:20:00 AM
Most precious and deligent READERS..thank you so much for your close attention LOL...did ya really think I wouldn't have checked the spelling...ARTUR is a valid spelling for our above mentioned King! BUT I am SO happy you are reading that carefully!!
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:41:00 AM
Interesting call to a higher calling as of Arthur and Guinevere. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:57:00 PM
Truly visual with images from King Arthur (with or without the "H") LOL. Thanks for all your guidance and kind comments on my poetry. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:36:00 PM
Deb i found your "h" playing it the parking lot i'm sure the king would like it in his name. john
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:00:00 PM
Hi Deb., Your words and flow are enjoyable to read. I love the noble nature of this poem. the imagery delights the imagination. And you are oh so right. Iambic pentameter is easier said than done. Thanks for your challenging contest. and for your comments on a couple of my iambic pentameter poems. Still learning...Smiles, Dane
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:12:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for the feedback on my three best friends from school and afterwards. They are moved away and I've lost touch, but have made new friends.
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:11:00 PM
Beautiful lines here Deborah... Creative and unique, keep em comin'.....:JP]
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:42:00 PM
Such brilliant descriptive lines .. and the age old inclusion of King Arthur and his Queen... such grandeur... enjoyed Debbie and luv those last two lines.. awesome..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/9/2010 3:16:00 PM
Your creativity and imagination are being show cased in this intriguing and enjoyable read.
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