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About Last Night

I went to the party Had way too much to drink My head was spinning round I couldn't even think There was a girl I met We went back to my room Things got really heated My heart began to boom In moments of passion We tried everything She said I was sexy I made her bell ring From the bed to the floor Then up against the wall With no inhibitions We both had a ball The very next morning She was there in my bed The most gorgeous body With long hair that was red As she was waking She looked me in the eye " I must have been so drunk You are a homely guy!" Vicky's last night and this morning contest No, not a real Iife experience *lol*

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/21/2019 9:35:00 AM

Oh my? That says more about her than you for sure... Loved the write. Yes...party makes my head hurt too. Ann

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/21/2019 10:16:00 AM

I forgot I wrote this one. :0)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/17/2013 1:29:00 PM

OUCH!! Very funny!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2013 8:37:00 PM

;0)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/15/2013 7:35:00 AM

Lol, what a wild imagination Rick, I almost believed that this was a personal experience,lol, you make this write so alive, pleasure to read this :D hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2013 8:06:00 AM

Ha ha, no red heads for this guy.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/14/2013 2:08:00 AM

From the bed to the floor and up against the wall? Geez, Richard, you're quite the man!!!! Hahahaha. I know some of the guys reading this would wish for but one night of total abandon in your style. Good write and good luck in the contest, my friend. Licia :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2013 8:19:00 AM

You always make me smile Licia.

Richard D Seal

Date: 11/13/2013 8:14:00 PM

Hahahaha I sang this one all the way through Rick, That last stanza sorta takes the edge off a great night haha. This will do very well in the contest I'm sure of that. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:12:00 PM

Time will tell, thanks Rich. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2013 4:25:00 PM

hahaha. I loved seeing this one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:12:00 PM

Trying to put a twist on an old story.

Jay Loveless

Date: 11/13/2013 1:20:00 PM

;) Funny write about drunk nights. I enjoyed it

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:13:00 PM

Thanks Jay. ;0)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/13/2013 10:27:00 AM

ha! didn't think it was a real life experience (the last line gave you away!) but it's a fun poem. good luck in the contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:14:00 PM

You are kind Ilene, thanks.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/13/2013 10:20:00 AM

You didn't need that footnote, Richard. I KNEW it couldn't be you! HOW? That homely bit...DEAD giveaway. You are anything BUT.....Quite the opposite, indeed. As for the rest of the write.....HA! Redhead??? Hmmmmm...they are TOO temperamental. Brunettes...All the way. Can't blame ya. You were drunk...You rang the wrong bell! ;) HA HA HA!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:15:00 PM

You kill me Eileen, hands down the best comment. If I could fav it I would.

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/13/2013 9:51:00 AM

Ha! Excellent...bonus points on redheads. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:55:00 AM

:0) thanks!

Deb Wilson

Date: 11/13/2013 9:18:00 AM

Ha ha too funny Richard!! Best wishes for the contest...luv,Deb

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2013 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Deb, can always use a bit of luck.