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About Last Night

The cool touch of the blowing wind Set us on fire! Drawing us nearer; Closer together. We were a slave To the rhythm of the water, As it touches the beach. Unable to resist! In a trance,to the hypnotic Feeling of love's command; Wishing it to be everlasting! Like the burning sensations We have shared A while ago On the sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 7:39:00 PM
AWESOME DEAN.............SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:45:00 PM
Dean, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... xox Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM
awesome Nate
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:38:00 AM
The Passion of Youth regaled in Love; a potion of extreme happiness or extreme despair. Your poems express both. Life will tell your tale and how it is written is up to you. Enjoy reading your perspectives and the metaphors express well your meanings. Allan
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