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She is not so much a kitten as a weather-vane studying stillness through quartered panes from a swollen sill while I’m at my desk, coding in silence, awaiting the turn of weather. She leaps to my lap; invites my hand to collapse her coil, purring softly. I can’t help but notice the soothing sound of her notes; a timely breeze gently fluttering unfurled by the patient Monarch. 68 Words 5/24/17 Submitted for: One of Five – Seventy Words or Less Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 5/30/2017 10:33:00 AM
A great tribute to your cat, Phillip, she must be sure worth the distraction:)
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:07:00 AM
A lovely image of your purrfect cat! Congrats, Phillip! I am saving this!
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Date: 5/26/2017 1:44:00 AM
This makes me smile, and I will keep smiling whether you win or not. I wish I had your way with words. It's beautiful
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/26/2017 2:10:00 AM
My beautiful way with words produced a smile worthy 33rd place finish here, I believe :) - BUT, in my defense, I started this at 6pm yesterday forgetting I had Astros tickets for a game at 7pm so I spent a grand total of 94 seconds writing this while looking for my tennis shoes
Date: 5/24/2017 7:53:00 PM
Hey, I've got a friend that would love to meet your "Betty":) I would have never taken you for a cat person. Cool poem, Phillip. Good luck!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/24/2017 10:26:00 PM
Hey-o! DT is back! Good to see ya man
Date: 5/24/2017 6:31:00 PM
A purrrrfect tribute, Phillip.
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