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About a Dream 1

About a dream I had just lost my way in a wooded , Dark village. Trying to explore, through an Open hall where carpenters work, I find The hall’s other side walled up. I am told To take another path which further on Is blocked by a thatched shed with a table On top of which are a roasted chicken And side by a small, skeletal, bizarre Human figure. Three, four men are asleep On the floor. To them I declare without The least thought :’I am your saviour’. The one Who looks like the leader in colorful Long robes rises, smiles and prepares to speak. Right then, something wakes me up and I find My wife in deep sleep had just put her arm Over me. The morning finds my daughter Ill and my plans for the day cancelled. @ 26/ Nov/12 S.Jagathsimhan Nair For: Leonora Galinta’s ‘Waking up’ contest

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Date: 12/13/2012 2:08:00 PM
I like this more realiztic take. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 3:08:00 AM
Jag, congrats on your splendid win my friend..hope you are well...David
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Jag,xx
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:31:00 AM
Well penned! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/12/2012 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, SJ! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/26/2012 10:07:00 PM
Jag... got gripp...love this..pd
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:06:00 AM
Jag, this is scary, I like it though...David
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