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Ablaze

The spark ignited and threatened the paper The corners curled and burned black ablaze in reds It left behind the black ashes Of regret It closed into the center The trail of uncontrollable Disaster The smoke obscured reality And left the surroundings in a lightless poisonous cloud Choking on the only air there was left Until it was devoured all alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/8/2014 1:08:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Saira- I choose your first moving and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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