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Abele Trees In Autumn

Above the lake abele trees are golden Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle Two muted swans surrounded by reflective color Snowy white swans face longing for each other Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle The lake reflects gold and red like miracles Snowy white swans face longing for each other Knowing winter is coming with its bother Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle Two muted swans surrounded by reflective color Knowing winter is coming with its bother Above the lake abele trees are golden

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2009 10:10:00 AM

Sara,it is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/9/2009 5:50:00 AM

Beautiful poem Sara, a delight to read>>James

Jen H.

Date: 8/8/2009 7:00:00 PM

Superb, write. Each line conveying something a little different from the time before. Thanks for commenting on my poetry, hope to read more from you. ~Jen~

John Freeman

Date: 8/8/2009 5:44:00 PM

Beautiful flow, form, and subject, I could see the two beautiful swans stand up in the water flapping their wings, facing each other. beautiful picture. God bless Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/8/2009 5:15:00 PM

Sara, just wanted to say thank you so much for supporting my poetry! I admire your work immensely, such as your posting above! you have a beautiful heart! james

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/8/2009 2:21:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem. Im not familiar with this form but will look it up. And what an abele tree is...Good work. Barbara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/8/2009 2:21:00 PM

this form is complicated, you make it look like a day at the lake! really beautiful! Sara, and thanks for your support! jim