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An alien spaceship landed today Bouncing across my yard Coming out was a creature, strange Does he know he looks like lard? Everyone on the block did come For the strangest sight to see Gawking and laughing they watched him come Hobbling over to me I asked him his name "Jungo Dim", he replied "Karasana is where I am from Let me tell you why I came." "My planet is going to explode," said he "Next year we will all be dead Only you can save us," was his dire plea "Please help us," the alien said "Quiet!" I ordered, while trying to think Ruminating the options I had "Sure, I'll help you," I finally said "Tonight we will call on my dad." Under the waning moon we sped Very quickly to visit my father When we got there he thumped me on the head "Xavier, why me do you bother?" "You're the only one who can help," I replied "Zounds, what on earth shall we do?" "Alas, I can not be of help now." "Bring him back tomorrow at two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 12:30:00 PM
Just seeing this for the first time, and congrats. A good example of the form! andrea
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Date: 2/4/2010 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Fred. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations Fred, on your success in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Do You Know Your ABC’s?” contest with this creative poem. You're in the TOP10! It's easy to see why, too. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:00:00 PM
Made me chuckle Fred, nice piece, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Fred on your winning poem in the ABC contest.. wonderful and unique write and a well deserved HM... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:12:00 PM
Clever and cute! Jeralynn
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