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Abba

Abba the father my heart cries out to you. I am corner stoned with all I will ever be. I reach high and climb the skies just to see. I am in a world so confused it is hard to do. Abba the father my soul just passes through. I come to you and I am down on bended knee. I have a soul begging for justice to be set free. I am in a world where corruptions make new. I am searching the distance, Documenting my presence, Absorbing life’s existence, Developing omnipresence! As this world shatters and shakes, The Earth begins to violently quake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2009 6:09:00 AM
This has the makings of a fine sonnet..tweek it around a bit. Also, try to say the same thing without the "I" for who else would it be? An editor once made me aware that any time he looked at a poem and saw "I" he circular filed it. 10 syllables per line would work easiest for you I think? Light & Love
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:42:00 AM
Ann, this is an exceptional write. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:11:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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