Abatture

Abature leads deep Abditive road very grooved Hard to enter in

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James Fraser

Date: 8/10/2009 11:08:00 AM

Kool Haiku Sara>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/8/2009 9:32:00 PM

original pattern of thought! jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2009 1:49:00 PM

Awesome haiku, Sara! Cleverly worded and quite meaningful. Love, Carolyn (Still in the process of moving, but was suffering Soup withdrawal so I had to visit.)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/8/2009 1:37:00 PM

Interesting piece of art.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/8/2009 1:14:00 PM

interesting and thought worthy haiku!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2009 12:25:00 PM

Excellent Haiku. Thank you for your comment on my poem. In answer to your question about the Moon flower no I haven't but you can bet thanks to the web I will go look.Love, Carol