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Abandoned Farm in Northern Victoria

For decades, motor cars have driven past in haste, eyes not straying far from the highway to where, set back and obscured by scrub, an abandoned farm is slowly succumbing to rot. I catch a glimpse of an old cart out front and stop. Nothing moves or makes a sound as I approach on foot. It's as if the spirits of the place have paused and have taken refuge in the quiet, my trespass an interruption to their daily haunt. There is a farmhouse and a number of sheds all in a dilapidated state. Rotted weatherboards still hang onto the farmhouse frame, though a few have fallen off where rusted nails have given up their grip. Corrugated iron sheets replace window glass sealing in secrets that have slept in darkened rooms for what now must be more than fifty years. I lift a corner and peer in. Empty except for rubble strewn floors and sagging webs as if still weighted with captured dreams. Whoever lived here must have taken some pride in what they carved out of the bush, their labor fuelled by hope. A family with kids perhaps. There is a rope tied to an old car tyre still strung beneath a red gum that would have served as a swing. The remains of a dolls pram and a broken cricket bat continue their decomposition in one of sheds. Their lives now have dissolved into anonymity. In the privacy of my own quiet, I call out as would a visitor might have done to announce their presence at the farmhouse door. No answer. I leave, slowly dissolving into my own anonymity.

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Date: 4/23/2024 3:43:00 PM
I loved the journey into the old, abandoned farmhouse. Even now I like exploring the old farmhouses scattered along the countryside near where we live. Your descriptive words made me feel like I was accompanying you. I could see and feel the place, even the anonymity. The last line clenched the deal. Perfect. Well done, Paul. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/24/2024 4:09:00 AM
Such places are treasure troves of interest, history and nostalgia...food for the imagination. A rich vein of images to mine its always a challenge to decide what should be included and what should be omitted. Thankyou dear Sara for thoughtful comments.
Date: 4/23/2024 8:11:00 AM
Plenty of stand out lines and a steady and comforting voice. A pleasure to read and experience alongside you. This is a pastime I've given up as an adult but loved to do as a child. There is definitely a presence that lingers.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/24/2024 3:58:00 AM
Nice comment on the voice in the poem DD...interesting that the tone and rhythm came through...indeed value your observation. I try and make my poems appeal to the ear...good to get such feedfack when it seems to work. Take care my desr friend...
Date: 4/23/2024 6:55:00 AM
beautifully written Paul and a glimpse back into a simpler time and place.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/24/2024 3:51:00 AM
Thanks John for reading the poem and your kind comments. . Much appreciated.

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