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Abandoned

Dust drifting coating sills forlorn floating motes lost lonely abandoned the empty room sighs contest: TURN ON THE LANTERNE Margaret Foster Sept. 2011

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2011 4:06:00 PM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/9/2011 8:30:00 AM

WOnderful write!!! Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!----Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2011 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2011 4:06:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on 4th place win with this awesome Lanterne my friend...luv.. honored to share place with u..

Kash Poet

Date: 9/8/2011 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations Marg on your 4th place win in Nette's contest.

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/8/2011 10:51:00 AM

nicely done. Congratulations

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2011 8:45:00 AM

marge..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/8/2011 4:56:00 AM

Margaret congrats on your win..David

George Aul

Date: 9/7/2011 2:01:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed your poem..........George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2011 9:24:00 PM

LOVE IT. gosh, I feel horrible, everyone is coming up with great imaginative things. And my time is running out..... the contest is almost over!!

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/6/2011 4:21:00 PM

"The empty room sighs" is an outstanding combination of words. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR

Kash Poet

Date: 9/6/2011 10:30:00 AM

Very nice approach to the contest photo Marg;Best wishes.