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Only in September does my essence find release When the blaze of moments infects my hunger for raw *wantonness...* Gulls skitter on coastlines and reel overhead Their croons heralding summer's ebullience, Until my limbs twirl unceasingly For an endless tempo of bohemian dance: I shall but ignore* the parching sun And race with tousles of duskfall's groove, this free-fall surrender* to unknown escapades... Then weightless like a carefree rhythm Of a tide ebbing its murmured sigh-- This final brilliance quiets my indulgence Ending a night’s frolic through a beamed prayer. ~ For Dear Heart's Contest Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned *wantonness, ignore, surrender--abandon* 6/17/2020

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Date: 6/24/2020 7:11:00 PM
nette, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this beautifully penned, and I love your image too _Constance
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Date: 6/22/2020 7:58:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Nette. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:19:00 PM
This is a wonderful write, dear friend. I enjoyed reading and wanted to congratulate you on your so deserved win. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:11:00 PM
Nette, great write and imagery, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/17/2020 11:54:00 AM
Oh wow Nette, your poetry has always been wow, but I would say this is one of your very best, a fave for me! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/17/2020 11:43:00 AM
This is lovely, Nette. Well done indeed!
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:55:00 AM
This is an instant fave for me! What a mystical verse, untamed, free, artistic. Love to you Nette :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 5:15:00 AM
blended; all are blended in the endless tempo of bohemian dance
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Date: 6/17/2020 5:09:00 AM
You kept the soul of the write dancing in pure bliss...that is a prayer...Nice one nette
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