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A Yellow and Pink Sun

A yellow and pink sun smears and washes through an unfinished hopscotch square sing ~ Rain Rain Go Away ~

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/24/2024 12:54:00 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 2:01:00 AM

Michael,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2014 6:04:00 PM

this is such a little gem, Michael. Glad to find this one today.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2014 8:02:00 AM

Never played hopscotch but did often play foursquare. A great entry in the contest my friend!!! I really like it's inspirational meaning.. BBBBravo!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 4:54:00 AM

Lovely images, Michael. Good luck in the contest,