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A Writer's Comeback

For a thousand reasons I can't explain A writer for once lost her thoughts and shattered insane Doesn't know what to do, say or write For deep inside her mind, there was a fight. She was lost in an unknown forest Cried all night and longed for rest. Still stands in the fight she's in, For she believes that's where courage begins. Her tattered and distorted thoughts, Still remained but always at her cost. But she hoped that she would find her strife, Someone who could bring her back to life. So it was she found her dear; A prince that is sweet and clear, With his love and thoughts for her he said, And mended the writer's heart that once had bled. Her heart soon became a new, Because she found her inspiration in the prince he knew. And now a summer of joy she has, Because she could now write at last. This poem is so to speak, The words that came from the writer's mind at peak, Her thoughts are now so complete, For her dear prince, beside her seats.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/1/2016 3:19:00 PM
I'm glad that you'd found a new prince and a reason to write again...I'm still waiting for a frog prince..hehe... I enjoyed your poem a lot, Raisa!!:) Keep writing and never stop to amuse the world with our talent..all the way up here from Luzon, Aiyah :)
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Date: 9/27/2016 2:02:00 PM
Raisa A., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Raisa Aone Cabahug
Date: 9/28/2016 10:13:00 PM
I will in fact visit your poems. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your comments are welcome, too. I just started writing again after 7 years, so I am so rusty.
Date: 9/27/2016 2:23:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Raisa. :)
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Raisa Aone Cabahug
Date: 9/28/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Moon Flower! ^^,

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