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A World Without War Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Anoucheka Gangabissoon. Date written: 03/09/2024

a place beyond dreams; u t o p i a where unity blossoms and humanity shines so bright; no wars... are fought with words or with weapons; no bloodletting. a safe haven... where love reigns and peace is sustaining. i wish to live... there.

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Terry Miller

Date: 4/13/2024 9:07:00 AM

Wonderful poem and choice of form, congratulations

Tom Woody

Date: 3/22/2024 6:11:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Edward. I believe such a world is no mere fantasy. Indeed, we are on the cusp of seeing it's grand fulfilment - Psalm 37:9-11,29

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 9:37:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and commenting, Tom:-)

Valsa George

Date: 3/19/2024 4:58:00 AM

So sweet and nice. Though it is a Utopian dream, how I too wish to live there. Without being prolific or tedious, you have framed a peaceful world with much aplomb, dear Edward. All the best dear friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Valsa:-) Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2024 8:57:00 AM

You picked a REALLY great form for this theme. Wonderfully crafted, my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/14/2024 2:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/11/2024 4:34:00 AM

Count me in, I will happily live there. We can prey and dream and bring up anti violent kids, then prey some more. Wonderful poem Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:44:00 AM

Thank you very much, SV:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/10/2024 6:37:00 AM

Powerful sentiments--so succinctly delivered, my friend. ---where love reigns and peace is sustaining i wish to live...there--awesome!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:44:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Ink Empress

Date: 3/10/2024 3:16:00 AM

I wish to live there too dear EI, i love how you’ve written this and how youv conveyed your thoughts so seamlessly. Iv never tried this form but youv done an excellent job inspiring me. Brilliant and powerful. And soft how youv woven this. Pleasure reading you always, best wishes for the contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2024 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so much, Inky:-) I appreciate the visit and wonderful comments!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/9/2024 4:49:00 PM

I wish to live there too Edward, for everything you have expressed and wish for… Beryl

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/9/2024 7:46:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by and reading my poem, Beryl:-)