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Date: 12/26/2009 4:54:00 PM
I'm with L'Nass, this is probably one of the most original works I've read on PS and it's stunning visually. Also, I need to know what's in that 'treasure'. it's right under the subject's home so I'm gonna guess he buried it there, right below his heart:) cool write. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:32:00 AM
It is the imagery of all our chaos in the solidity of our sterile reality ... it is art that enunciates what creativity is always about. It is one heck of a poem. Well done.
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Date: 12/13/2009 9:35:00 AM
Interesting, original approach! Love, Florentina
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Date: 12/11/2009 1:55:00 PM
funny, I like it!! yet so prophetic!
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