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A World Away

somewhere sunflowers catch a Van Gogh glow nature's fragile stems that pull us up that spill their light like heroism to break the growling crumbs of earth somewhere people die, bludgeoned by circumstance by life altering chaos from a tyrant's malice that strays like poison gas to sever their resolve somewhere folks rebuke science to strip a health direction claims of stifling freedom flashing banners of entitlement that risk collective safety somewhere freedom's script breaks its rigid capsule for a people reclaiming dignity to fight the beastly brute the truest code of conduct towering like sunflower fields in far off places Poem composed April 15, 2022

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Date: 5/1/2022 3:28:00 AM
Your poem is alive with symbolism Brian. Alongside Van Gough's sunflowers - I believe he viewed his favourite colour yellow as the colour of life - Ukraine's sunflower and its worldwide symbol of solidarity stands tall throughout. I love how you have used the references to sunflowers in the first stanza and then the last stanza effectively bookending the poem. .. my take on a poem that's deserving of many more views and comments. :) Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/1/2022 6:45:00 AM
Thanks very much for your supportive message, Gary. Any reference to the petulant anti vaxers will not prove popular. So be it. When Ukrainians are truly fighting freedom's battle, that's the clarion call in need of highlighting. Thank you again. Brian
Date: 4/19/2022 7:07:00 AM
You juxtapise all extremes of life, witnessed by Van Gogh's art. Loved it. One tries 2 forget war ... & Can't.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/19/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Anil. Your words are much appreciated. Be well + safe in our war torn world. Brian

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