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A Wonderful Night

Of course it was pouring rain, When my tire decided to go flat; And I wasn’t really surprised To find no spare in the trunk in back. It was four o’clock in the morning; I was headed home to catch some sleep; After twenty-four hours in the hospital, At her side the vigil to keep. Five miles I walked in the dark; Tired, wet and cold. Each step closer to home; Each minute growing old. I approached the locked front door; Searched my pockets for the keys. Suddenly a picture flashed in my mind; I left them on the driver’s seat. Returning to my old clunker; Practically walking in a trance, I tripped over a pothole; Tore the knees in my pants. An eighteen wheeler passed me by; Splashing in a puddle; Covering me with muddy water; Leaving me all befuddled. Finally I reached my car And saw the keys right where I left them; Of course you know the doors were locked And there was no way I could get them. I sank down and sat in the mud; Watched the blood ooze from my knees. The rain was starting to change to snow; The cold made me start to sneeze. A vibration in my pocket, Snapped me out of my delirium; It was her doctor on my mobile phone; I had a hard time in hearing him. “Your wife is out of her coma; She is going to be alright.” I hung up and thanked the Lord For blessing me with a wonderful night. Written 3/3/2011

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Date: 3/8/2011 12:03:00 AM
that is always how it is for me and joe my hubbie is constantly having so much bad luck and then once in a great while a nice blessing comes. I am hoping beyond hope for that to finally come after this horrible start to our year. This was just great. congrats on your win in this difficult contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in John Heck's "Hey...Mr. Editor" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 5:31:00 AM
Really liked this one, Joe and of how that single phone call turned everything around in the end-- very stirring piece and sure glad to see you among John's winners! Way to go for you :)!
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful job Joe. Good to see your honored poem's success in the contest.
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:38:00 PM
Wow.....I did not expect that last stanza! Well done, Joe. What a story told!! Congrats!!!
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:23:00 PM
This was really awesome, Joe. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's Contest, Joe. Love this. Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your HM in John's contest with this stupendous write and entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:01:00 PM
a great turnaround, joe... simply amazing with all the wonderful twists in it.. winning wishes of for the narch madness tourney! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 11:57:00 AM
In spite of all you went through that evening, it did turn out to be a "Wonderful Night," Joe. Is this based on fact? Regardless, I hope you'll consider entering it in the March Madness contest. Had some great laughs reading it, but absolutely rejoiced when I read the last verse. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2011 11:12:00 AM
priorities eh? most of us would dwell on the bad not thank God for the good, wonderful poem as usual Joe
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Date: 3/3/2011 11:07:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Joe. Love, Carol
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