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A Wonderful Dream For You

A wonderful dream Nights above to the sound of love all the stars look so bright tonight the moon smiles down upon us as we hold each other so tight the snow begins to fall so gentle to the floor it covering is so beautiful and white tonight as the morning sun appears i awake in a cold shake once again my dream overtake my mind of thought the night walker

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Date: 11/10/2010 11:00:00 AM
Duncan, I have pictured this in my mind, beautiful with a touch of sad........ Well written As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:13:00 AM
Hi Duncan.I think your poetry is unique.It has depth, beauty and pathos.I like this one very much.You have created a beautiful picture of two lovers with softness and subtlety that lends itself to our imagination. But I am confused by the continuous signature of 'The Night Walker'.Is this your alter ego,an alias or something to add intrigue to what you write?. (soup mail for you) Love June(S)
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:28:00 PM
without dreams we could not live from the beautiful ones to the evil they all serve a purpose and deliver much,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/3/2010 8:32:00 PM
it really a nice dream,duncan.Ienjoyed it,fabiyas
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Date: 11/3/2010 9:47:00 AM
This is beautiful, night walker. Keeping writing these lovely verses which we enjoy! Always, Audrey
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:10:00 AM
oh no...are you a sleep walker... my husband has done that and done some strange things.
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:42:00 AM
A wonderful dream of the night walker, enjoyed it, duncan
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