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A Wonderful Day - Collaboration With Chris Green

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It rains today I need my boots and coat before it goes away I have a little boat No sun is seen But that is quite okay My boat is tangerine We’ll sail away the day My boat and I We need more friends outside Under this pouring sky Come out to sail. Don't hide! It is just rain Get wet for a while There’s no need to complain Let’s float with a smile It's puddle fun We jump and scream and fall And make our rain boots run Until our mommies call In from the storm Is where we’ll have to go Where we can get so warm Cause, mommy tells us so I'm dripping wet My boat stands on the sill He's hoping now I bet That very soon we will Walk out the door Start playing once again Floating off once more Beneath the pouring rain It's warm in here My orange boat dreams deep As captain I must steer But first I need to sleep I’m too groggy No time left to borrow Nodding of while hoping It is raining tomorrow : ) *** Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White November 2, 2017

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Date: 12/5/2017 5:22:00 PM
Chris and Darren, you both wrote a cute little boys poem. i enjoyed it. Both of you have a nice evening my friends Peace and Love and Joy always.
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Date: 11/29/2017 9:44:00 AM
Makes me remember my two little boys - mud and all. Sweet by two fine poets.
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:17:00 AM
Wonderful collaboration. Well done, Chris and Darren.
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:34:00 PM
Two little boys with two little toys. What good mates you make.
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Date: 11/15/2017 8:37:00 AM
Such a lovely collaboration, White and Green:) I enjoyed the story:)
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:25:00 AM
A wonderful depiction of little boys playing. My son came to mind, standing there soaking wet and (many times) mud covered, but so very happy. Great collaboration guys !!! :-)
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:08:00 AM
Adoring the boyhood memories! A cute collaboration! I hope to see more of you two in unison and individual writes!!!!
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:41:00 PM
It is always wonderful to see you two collaborating. This brings a smile :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 2:20:00 PM
Do you need extra crew?I might want to sail away with you :).Lovely fantasticcollab.So fun to read you two again.A fave.
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:58:00 AM
Charming, Chris and Darren. Reminds me of when we used to float paper boats in the garden when it rained. // Barry.
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Date: 11/2/2017 8:51:00 AM
A wonderful read you guys, reigniting the inner child, donning my fuschia poncho today I'll be thinking of you two as I prance through the puddles with the pooches :) xomo x2!
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Date: 11/2/2017 6:44:00 AM
This poem is a joy to read--presently so softly--kudos to you--Darren and Chris!
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:21:00 AM
absolutely charming Chris and Darren, you captured the thoughts of a little child so perfectly!!!:-) a delightful collaboration:-) hugs jan xx
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