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VOICE: AHMAD RAZVI

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A Womb in Darkness Collaboration with White Wolf Now I am, while first I wasn't, Now I have become. From whence first I was, I now know I was not. I sent forth my whole being, My arms to reach out and grasp, My legs to stand or run fast. My head to ponder what I saw and heard. Leaving behind my torso which became a barren place, in need to share its empty space. A broken shell, discarded like a cicada's birthplace a butterfly's cocoon I grow within, from whence I was first broken. During shattering death, it knew no life to be within its womb. The long ascend my birth coincides with my end Light and dark Alpha and Omega All colors in the spectrum, There is no white or black People are so blind to where they stem from Leaving the children of the light also blind! And so the light is obscured from understanding, so close at hand, but still not seen. Light is coming, and when it does, it shall phase everything together *** January 9, 2017

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Date: 1/9/2017 6:53:00 PM
A great collaboration - you guys are amazing writing together <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2017 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Claudia <3
Date: 1/9/2017 12:39:00 PM
Out of such a collaboration it is impossible anything else to come out but light! A seven to each!
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2017 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the 7 :)
Date: 1/9/2017 11:54:00 AM
Great job, I enjoyed bending my mind around your thoughts. An excellent collaboration. A 7 for sure.
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thank you Richard! Very happy with the 7 :)
Date: 1/9/2017 9:37:00 AM
This is a really nice Darren. I read this earlier on Rick's page. You two write great together. Another seamless collaboration
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Chris. I thoroughly enjoy collaborating. With everyone you write together, the style is different. It's give and take, and it adds something special.

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