A Woman's Gaze

A Woman's Gaze For Centuries, men have tried to unravel the mystery in a woman's gaze. It can be full of torture, or it can be full of love. many men have fallen in love with the eyes of a woman, not even knowing why. They were just captivated by her gaze. Artists have tried painting pictures, to capture the beauty that lays deep within. What is it that they are looking for? Is it something in her past life, or the beauty in her soul? They don't know, but the search goes on. Could it be the mystery of her love? Only the true meaning of the glean of her eyes - conceals some of the torture, or some of the love, she has endured. Who can tell if there is hate, or she feels pain - or if she loves, by looking deep. Maybe it's a mystery that's far too deep. Each woman, carries a mystery, that can't be revealed to just anyone. The mystery she carries is the true meaning of love. It's like having a key to open a door" not all the keys fit. Do I need to tell you more?...
Copyright by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/23/2013 11:15:00 PM
nicely done Lucilla, reads like a LifeTime movie ;} I thought I'd throw a little humor in for my " Tell" ;} you have a great day .
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:05:00 PM
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:16:00 PM
An amazing poem divulging the secret of a womans gaze. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your beautiful comment on my Tanka Hug Me. I am grateful. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/9/2013 10:44:00 PM
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Date: 2/9/2013 6:27:00 AM
Yes, dear Lucilla, Woman is a Mystery waiting to be discovered and when you discover her, A key is not enough to open her hart but rather it requires a combination of keys. And since woman Is like the moon mysterious, even when man sees the full moon, still he has to deal with the unseen side! Beautiful poem with many revelations about women that only woman: THIS MASTERPIECE OF DIVINE INSPIRATION knows. Excellent work! Thank you
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:45:00 PM
Hello Lucy, men are reasonable and sane and us ladies are way on the crazy side of things so its only understandable that men can't understand us let alone capture or essence in a work of art perfectly. and the gaze of women is the quiescence of it all. a very lovely poem that makes me glad to be a women. always with lots of love~LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2013 8:28:00 AM
beauty is an essence Lucilla, but at my age, it goes much more deeper than that,, anyhow you poetry is beautiful and sincere, and i for one just love reading your poems...
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:39:00 PM
i;ve discovered the key is usually good looks.
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:18:00 PM
Lucy, thank you so much for the comment. I will be back to read this poem... always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2013 10:58:00 AM
hi there , no pun intended, you re right but its works the other way to come some men just have come to bed eyes or so I have heard lol xx
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:01:00 AM
very amazing written dear Lucilla <3 <3 <3 enjoyed so much.. have your wonderful day my dearest one<3 :) Sk
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:27:00 AM
A very good poem Lucilla! - No, he can have a whole bunch of keys .... but it is not certain they fit. - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:05:00 AM
Very nice Lucilla! I love the mystery part - only meant to be unraveled by the holder of the right key, lol. Have a wonderful day!
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:02:00 AM
Very nice, capturing the essence... Terry (I must admit, I myself am an 'eye' man)
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:35:00 AM
ha ha...I really liked the way you ended it.And yes that mysterious gaze...You women are a beautiful thing. :o) Oh! And I will try out that tiger bone...See how it works.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/6/2013 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Dan. I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 2/5/2013 9:45:00 PM
This is a fabulous and incredible write my friend! I loved reading this dynamic poem of a woman's gaze, and it is mysterious, but that is the fun of the gaze, the mystery of it! What a positively superior piece, Great Work!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/5/2013 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much. You always make me feel good. Many blessings always.
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