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A Woman

I used to be able to show you the sun But we don't know who we are anymore Your face is as strange as the tides in the sea Mine is like a monster breaking the glass You used to love me and I loved you But I realized, we realized, that there is more Life is to be enjoyed, and fighting for attention Was taking that enjoyment away from me I love this life and everything about it Yes, that means I love the hardships Maybe not always, but eventually- They make me a better, a stronger girl And I have hope of, one day, becoming a woman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 2:07:00 PM
A very fine write and yes one day you will become a very fine woman. Many blessings and thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:20:00 AM
beautiful..& genuine write. :) to love yourself first is just one of the first steps of becoming stronger..growing, and getting through life. loved your poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 10/25/2012 12:55:00 PM
One very well written poem, I like it - well done dear Juli-Michelle. Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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