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A Wish In the Rain

Stood in the Rain And felt it wash away the tears. Closed my eyes And pictured you here. Holding me close and not letting go I need you now more than you will ever know. So I opened my eyes, In my mind praying this wish comes true. Cause I'm standing in the rain And waiting right here for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/20/2014 8:34:00 AM
A beautiful write. Surely fate will send a blessing.. BBBRAVO!!!!!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/20/2014 8:51:00 AM
aahh many Thanks Rob :)
Date: 6/19/2013 8:47:00 AM
Sweet and romantic. The rain washing away the tears as you wait. Nice imagery :)
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/19/2013 8:50:00 AM
Thank You Karen
Date: 6/16/2013 6:18:00 PM
Here's to the arrival of your sunrise...
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/18/2013 2:53:00 AM
Arr i await that

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