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A WISH He holds out both his hands eyes closed, and aimed up high a wish escapes, it flies and on a star it lands that wishes it could give the means and will to live *** © Darren White November 2, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/14/2018 8:19:00 PM
beautiful well expressed keep up the good work
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Date: 11/20/2017 1:49:00 AM
Very touching and it invokes such deep emotional feelings.
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:09:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed!
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:37:00 PM
A beautiful poem <3 Darren <3 Hoping wishes come true <3
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Date: 11/2/2017 1:32:00 PM
Lovely image, Darren.
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:08:00 AM
Your wish will be answered
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:41:00 AM
A Beautiful Poem, Darren and a beautiful wish. I believe in wishes !
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Date: 11/2/2017 8:42:00 AM
Deeper than the light words, expertly crafted, a living pen. Much love to you sweet poet, Bless xomo
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Date: 11/2/2017 6:46:00 AM
A magnificent write, Darren--so well done!
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