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A Wintry Dawn

Woke up to a cold and wintry morn, No blue sky, just a threatening dawn. Clouds are low and a dirty grey, Look full of rain ready to cascade today. No sun to see to give us mirth, Waiting for the deluge to water the earth. Then, as I watched, to my delight, The sun burst though, shining bright. The clouds dispersed as the sun shone down, Wiping away the mornings frown. Another nice day in Cyprus. © Dave Timperley 13/12/2018

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Date: 1/20/2022 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful. I love when the sun surprises us like that. You have shown it well :)
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Dave Timperley
Date: 3/4/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. No poetry so far in 2022, in a dry season. Note to self...Must do better. Blessings D.
Date: 11/5/2021 4:16:00 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one today. We have clouds today as well but the sun hasn't tried to shine yet or maybe it can't reach through the darkness. Creative lines and I hope the frown stays away. Sara
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Dave Timperley
Date: 11/8/2021 5:07:00 AM
Good Afternoon, Sara. 29 degrees and an azure blue sky here. Thanks for your comment. Blessings. D.

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