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A Winter Evening Commute

The winter darkness falls before the day Has run its course, long ere the eyes of those Who labor seek surcease from weariness. The home-bound traffic winds its halting way Beneath the moon-bound Evening Star and slows— A mess. And so I sit with promises to keep, Ensnarled within a concrete wilderness As news and music streams from radios. At last the exit home—to eat, to sleep, And rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/21/2020 2:16:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara
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Date: 11/17/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy. This is my first attempt at a curtail sonnet—a form I had never heard of before finding myself challenged by a contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/17/2020 7:31:00 AM
Me neither but I hope to give it a go if time allows.
Date: 11/17/2020 12:38:00 AM
I looked up curtal sonnets on this site and am so glad that I came across your poem, James as it seems to be to be a perfect example of the form. Your two-liners are impactful and contrast frustration and blissful repose brilliantly. You really drew me into your poetical journey.
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