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A Wind Blows

A wind blows here From distant far Cold and rare Swept from a star And little bits Of bones And little bits Of souls Through the forest wanders Filtered by trees. A wind blows here From distant stars Set churning mere sea like spars Whipping The flesh of belief Sipping Randomly The Fahrenheit of grief On bars Of new beginnings A wind blows here The weatherman Can declare It from the north, wan Temperatures Above the belt Of Capricorn. I see the dust Each sunset The sands of Africa Are not wet Where do tears Go When they are dry? A wind blows here In the warm eye And all I hear Is music on high Music in Coconut fronds leap In willow trees Dancing with the breeze Music sang in spirituals When hope was young Younger than the man Coming through the trees From the cold Mountains Where mothers bent their knees That the dreamers dream Would come to past. A fresh wind blows At last A wind blows here And seeds are cast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/17/2009 3:58:00 PM
To think that we are the repositories for all that have gone before ... smile ... great thread of consciousness weaved here, L'nass! I'm glad you have brought your writing to PoetrySoup!
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Date: 3/15/2009 6:00:00 PM
Another masterful poem from one who takes in what most cannot even see. excellent - I especially love it, as wind is my lover and favorite element, we are one. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/15/2009 2:35:00 PM
Most excellent BRAVO! Loved the final lines. This would be a great contest entry for % Elements 5/ senses ( no need to use all of them) simply trying to emphasis the "showing" which you do so well! Huzzah! Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:16:00 PM
I love the sands of Africa imagery and how it ties out to tears dried. I think what I like most though is how this wind is making it's presence known through whatever channel presents itself. The wind itself is invisible but it's impact is seen in anything that interacts with it. Very interesting concept. Thanks for sharing. - Yoni
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:54:00 PM
I love many lines here, especially 'where do tears go when they are dry?' A strong, personal telling of heritage and the past. Hauntingly beautiful, evoking powerful feelings. And wow, that last verse, give me chills. Love, Shar
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