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A Whole Story In Strips

A story unfolded On a monitor strip From the laughter when eating Chinese food To the small talk that ended in an explosive argument Oxygen still pumping From regular to irregular From controllable to uncontrollable Heart palpitations Mind racing A little dose of sedation To sleep those thoughts A son's fight with his mother A mother's fight to breathe And as he walked away, she lay there fighting for her life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/3/2015 3:34:00 PM
Very disturbing but well written. Conveys the drama and horror. What secrets lie hidden to produce such disproportionate responses. Kind regards, Ian
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:25:00 AM
Sometimes family feuds lead serious illnesses of the heart and mind. Thank u Ian for the visit

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