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A Whirlpool of My Mind One of My Best

A WHIRLPOOL OF MY MIND Cycles of life..churn..revolve,dissolve.. resurface..mix in restless sleep. Deep from the chasms of the unconscious, the froths of yesterday's concerns as flotsam become a jetsam dream..to scatter up on the beach of our tomorrow..as hazy recollections. Forlorn..half-remembered..such detritus of our persona slowly erodes shrinking in the light of day. Put into proportion such giants become dwarf like..distant litter on our horizon..to fade away forever upon the tide of each new dawn's..reality. Re post inspired by TS contest

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Date: 12/2/2016 8:51:00 AM
A whirpool of a poem, pulled off a 7!
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/2/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Kim ,a very encouraging comment
Date: 12/2/2016 7:22:00 AM
7. Love it, Brian. "the froths of yesterday's concerns" = brilliant.
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/2/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Doug , a very encouraging comment
Date: 12/2/2016 7:22:00 AM
A stunning poem, Brian! I'm in awe...
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/2/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Rick

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