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A Way To Greener Pastures

My words echo back to me Off barren walls Through empty halls Find no hearing ears this eve Except my own I'm quite alone. Soon perhaps I'll leave this place For greener fields 'Cross distant hills And never happen back this way Except in thought For lessons taught. I'll follow perchance this gale That birthed my soul And kept the coals of hope aglow A peaceful breeze that fills my sails And safely takes me Across seas of animosities. Here the grass has all but died And turned to brown Exposing bare ground No longer can my roots be tied I'll leave the wind the master To choose a way to greener pastures. Timothy I. Brumley Just in case any of my fans are wondering, I wrote this poem in 1979 just before coming back from overseas during my enlistment in the Air Force. The breeze, or gale, mentioned above represents the Holy Spirit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/9/2011 10:40:00 AM
The deeper meaning is wonderful, keep your pen working its magic
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Date: 5/1/2011 9:48:00 PM
wow, this is awesome, especially after the footnote to let us know when and where you were when you wrote it. Thanks for posting it, Timothy.
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Date: 5/1/2011 4:33:00 PM
The poem was really good til I read the postamble-then it gave me goosebumps. Nice light rhyme-beautiful analogies from a treasured veteran. Blessings 2 u. Thanks for serving. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/1/2011 12:14:00 PM
enjoyed reading this refreshing and warm piece of poetry. thank you Tim for reading and commenting on Grandma's Rocking Chair.
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this on a sunny spring afternoon...If we let the HS lead, the pastures will be greener..Sara
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Date: 4/29/2011 8:02:00 AM
Glad you added the footnote, Tim. I thought you might be preparing to move. There are times we all wish we could find greener pastures, but the message has more impact coming from a soldier. Hope you're doing well, Tim. Love, Carolyn
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