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A Warm Welcome For the Ridiculers

They fear what they do not understand but without understanding I fear no man They subdue what they cannot naturally conquer so I turn the tables put them in a locker They doubt what they cannot control with aggression I removed all the clips from their smith and wessons They hate what they cannot possess or call liar I confront them with truth and watch them perspire They add height to the obstacles they cannot hurdle but I leap right over and scrape not a knuckle They attempt to build walls in front of us all their bricks are unleveled and gravity calls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/22/2012 11:34:00 AM
nice! jimbo
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/22/2012 7:01:00 PM
Thanks jimbo
Date: 6/20/2012 10:29:00 AM
An awesome write of inspiration!! Excellent flow!!
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Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/20/2012 10:37:00 AM
Lol..He trippin if he doesn't know who that is..probably too young..As a matter of fact..I need to go purchase that movie again..lol
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/20/2012 10:34:00 AM
Thanks pace btw school ya boy elliot on bruce leroy and the glow he said he wasnt familiar i told him to ask you lol
Date: 6/20/2012 9:24:00 AM
GREAT title, dear Shantez! Every single line has immense density and this one is in my fav's <3
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/20/2012 10:18:00 AM
A starts a start. Do SOMETHING is the only advice I can really give you. You said you don't know where to start so I figure you HAVE ideas just can't pick which one to proceed with. You impress me more with each write. I don't appreciate BLAND comments because that doesn't help me improve so I wouldn't do that to any other poet. We're each other's audience!
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/20/2012 9:34:00 AM
thanks brittany tryin to work out the kinks in my writing but dont know where to start
Date: 6/20/2012 9:11:00 AM
WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/20/2012 9:22:00 AM
Thanks sensei btw did ink u tell you about the last dragon lol
Date: 6/20/2012 9:09:00 AM
Brotha you rise higher than me! I bow and give thanks to the Almighty One! Peace and blessings my friend!
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/20/2012 9:20:00 AM
I set my table like king arthur my brother equal space and portions no comparing each other Over scenarios you may float beyond I may be stuck upon But I appreciate this page were on much peace to you Mr henderson

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